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A Trip I Remember

Write a 10-sentence paragraph about a trip you remember. You will plan your ideas first, then write one sentence at a time. After each sentence you will see a good example and why it works.

A view of green mountains and a winding river from a train window, with a paper map, a camera, and a cup of coffee on the table.
Use this photo for ideas, or write about any trip you remember.

Your paragraph so far

    How each exercise works

    1. Think about the job of the next sentence.
    2. Write it in your own words.
    3. Compare it with a good example and see why it works.